As you know, here at All Things Writing this month we are taking a look at the romance genre. Last week I did a review of Victoria Richard's book, The Banshee's Desire. This week we will be meeting a great guest blogger, Daisy Banks, who knows her way around the world of romance. Before her posts goes up tomorrow, I thought I'd take the opportunity to put out five rules that a romance novel generally follows.
Just because the couple in your story happens to fall in love doesn't necessarily mean you would find it in the romance section of the book store. In order for a reader to locate your book there, the romance has to be the driving force of the store! Everything that happens either furthers or hinders the romantic relationship.
Here's a few rules to follow if you are creating a romance or if you are trying to determine what your novel genre is.
1. If it is romance, then there must be a happy ending. No loose ends between the happy couple! Any doubts they had about their love are resolved by the time the author types The End.
2. It's acceptable for the man or the woman to act like an ass. They have to redeem themselves by the end though. We must like them enough to believe they'll have their happily ever after.
3. Nobody likes it in traditional romance if either hero or heroine is cheating on a spouse. A mistress--whatever. But spouses are right out. If they've been married before, then the spouse better be dead, drowned at sea, killed in a tragic carriage accident, or have some terrible character trait that makes us think our hero/heroine is better off without them.
4. There should be sex. What kind of sex depends on the romance genre. It could be as simple as the unbuttoning of a glove. Or it could be more explicit with the implied "fade to black." Some authors provide the down and dirty kind that is just two steps away from being labeled erotica. Regardless, readers like to live vicariously and the protagonist having sex is one way for them to do that.
5. Something must tear our lovers apart. At least temporarily. Some examples would be: the hero writes a letter that is misunderstood. An overheard conversation implies the wrong thing. The scent of the ex girlfriends perfume is on his collar. This by no means cancels out the happily ever after rule. The conflict must occur somewhere in the middle of the book. Make it look like they will get what they want and then take it away. Of course, all must be resolved in the end.
Are there more rules of romance? Absolutely! And don't forget the many subgenres in the romance section, too. They all use the above rules, but can manipulate them according to their needs in the genre.
I hope you enjoy the many guest bloggers we have coming up and learn a little something about romance writing!
Tuesday, February 12, 2013
Thursday, February 7, 2013
Should you be afraid of ghosts?

Not that this has to be the case, of course.
What’s prompted me to write this blog post is that I've read a lot over the last month or so about how 'having a ghost-writer' is the way forward for a successful writer. Maybe it is, but I'd just like to temper that with some sobering thoughts of my own which are based on some pretty bitter experiences. It also explains why I don't and won't use such a service but, of course, you must make your own decision on the matter.
The advantage of using a ghost-writer is obvious and we’ve got plenty of ways of describing such a way of earning a living:
- Sit back and watch the money roll in
- Easy Street
- Money for nothing
- Let someone else do all the work
- Taking care of business
- A can of worms
- Double-handling
- Too many cooks
- More trouble than it’s worth
- Waste of time
Firstly, there's the 'null' approach which I know an acquaintance of mine follows. It's the vague and rather forlorn hope that the simple act of paying for the services of a ghost-writer guarantees that copyright automatically passes to you.
That may well be the case but it's by no means a 'done deal'. Should it all go horribly wrong and the ghost-writer claim a percentage of your success, your first argument will be (no doubt) “Hey, I've paid you for this”, just like you might go into a shop and purchase some goods or eat a meal in a restaurant. Can you imagine, a week later the chef saying, "Hey, Mac, I made you that lasagna last week. I want it back now."?
This is fine and dandy for goods, but laws concerning subcontracts and the supply of labor are very different. Without a written agreement, it becomes a case (excuse pun) of "What's reasonable?". Not only is this not as clear-cut as might be thought, it's also potentially very expensive to fend off an all-out attack on one’s royalties.
An example of why copyright does not automatically pass to you is the existence of the numerous article depositories which showcase your work in return for back-links, writing business or the sale of the article itself. Obviously they will all have carefully drawn up agreements but, if you don't have anything in place, who's to say that you aren't offering some similar deal?
Of course, there's the other end of the spectrum where you shell out a fortune on a hot-shot lawyer who (no doubt) will draw up a wordy agreement full of legalese double-speak which will thoroughly flummox both you and your ghost-writer. You might even scare them off in the process!
Unfortunately (and as one who's had to fight the subsequent battles), getting a lawyer involved does not guarantee that everything's been taken care of. In my experience, it's commonplace for lawyers to shoe-horn clients into a one-size-fits-all contract which contain a lot of generalizations but bear little relevance to the specific situation. If you subsequently challenge the lawyer, you'll end up being blamed for not having told them something germane which you can't prove otherwise. At this point, you risk being at war with both your ghost-writer and your lawyer - an unenviable situation.
The best way to deal with the issue of ghost-writers laying future claim to your work is to spell out in very clear terms what you are agreeing to. Don't attempt legalese, don't try to be cute, clever or coy, just stick to the specifics. To help you on your way, here's a very rough structure plan for your agreement but you'll need to adapt it to suit.
Define:
- Precisely who you are and precisely who the ghost-writer is.
- Precisely what they are writing.
- The payment - how much, what stages and when.
- That full copyright and the right to withhold the ghost-writer’s name will pass to you on full payment of their fees.
- What happens if the work is not up to scratch (expand on that if you can).
- Both date and both sign
This is a business arrangement so don't be shy or worry about hurting the feelings of the ghost-writer. Remember, if you've made it into the big league with your sales, you've created an 'it's worth a shot' situation for your ghost-writer to sue you. What have they got to lose? And, if you've nothing in writing, you're fair game for every shyster lawyer who fancies themselves at a spot of contract law.
After all, the whole point of hiring a ghost-writer is that you can exorcise them when they've finished haunting you. That’s the spirit!
Clive West runs Any Subject Books which publishes a range of quality books from up-and-coming authors. They're always interested in new submissions which are welcomed via their writers wanted page. Clive's wife, Damaris, has written a number of books including an account of their life in Italy called A Postcard From Umbria.
Wednesday, February 6, 2013
The Banshee's Desire by Victoria Richards--a review
Here is the first review in a series of romance books I'll be chatting about this month at All Things Writing. Drop by next Wednesday to meet Daisy Banks who will guest blog about the art of writing romance!
I've always been fascinated by banshees and Irish folklore. When
I stumbled upon Victoria Richard's book The Banshee's Embrace a few months ago,
I just fell in love with the story. I'd already checked out her book, Voodoo
Love, so I knew this one had the potential to be another great read. I wasn't disappointed. The Banshee's Embrace was funny, sexy, and
very romantic. I admit that romance is not always my first choice when it comes
to choosing a genre, but as you can see, Ms. Richard's has really hooked me!
Which is why I was delighted to read her follow up book, The
Banshee's Desire which is free today and tomorrow at Amazon!
Here is the Amazon blurb:
This is Book II of The Banshee's Embrace
Trilogy
Half banshee Jacqueline Huston is confused. With the Brotherhood of Merlyn looking for her, the specter of Death wanting her soul, and having to live with the knowledge that her wizard boyfriend's son killed her husband, sometimes life feels a little chaotic. Then the Brotherhood kidnaps the love of her life, Toby Williams, in an attempt to convince her to join their crusade for power over other supernatural beings.
In this book, Jacqueline comes to grips with her enormous powers--capable of reaping any soul, a temptation she must avoid at all costs. But will she be able to control her powers, or will she use them and risk losing everything in order to save the one she loves?
Half banshee Jacqueline Huston is confused. With the Brotherhood of Merlyn looking for her, the specter of Death wanting her soul, and having to live with the knowledge that her wizard boyfriend's son killed her husband, sometimes life feels a little chaotic. Then the Brotherhood kidnaps the love of her life, Toby Williams, in an attempt to convince her to join their crusade for power over other supernatural beings.
In this book, Jacqueline comes to grips with her enormous powers--capable of reaping any soul, a temptation she must avoid at all costs. But will she be able to control her powers, or will she use them and risk losing everything in order to save the one she loves?
One of the things I liked about the first book is that it started with
a strong hook. Banshee's Desire is no different! We learn right away that the
wizards are majorly pissed off that Jacqueline has killed the son of one of
their own and they demand vengeance. The
struggle Jacqueline is having with her powers becomes obvious when she kills a
lawyer who attacked her friend--even though it wasn't her job to take his soul
unless he was already at the brink of death. (Personally, I thought the creep
got what was coming to him!) Now she struggles to maintain balance in her life
and be a good person while at the same time dealing with the desires and wishes
of the murdered souls who cling to the person that killed them.
Talk about a headache! Yikes!
I really liked seeing Jacqueline's inner struggle in this book.
Her character has evolved a great deal and while we see some of her previous
insecurities, the reader can also tell she no longer just adopts a "wait and see" attitude about
things. She is determined to make things happen--whether they are right or not.
Toby, a wizard, is her love interest. I also feel there was some
interesting character development with him, too. Strong, mature, and unafraid
to kick a little ass when called for, Toby has a lot to deal with between
balancing his feelings for Jacqueline and making sure she doesn't decide to
kill his son, Gabe, in her need for revenge.
My favorite character is Irish Death. I loved the idea that there
are many Deaths and they are all working different divisions of the world.
Irish Death comes across as a humorous fashion saavy chick who can turn into a
total bitch at any moment. Lots of fun!
Since it is the month of love, let's talk about sex! Several
steamy scenes stand out in Banshee's Desire and made me wonder where I can find
my own wizard to create a little magic in the bedroom. However, I wouldn't say that
this book is over-run by sexual situations.
There's just enough va-voom to keep you panting, but not lose interest
in the story.
The action is fast paced and holds plenty of twists and turns to
keep the reader invested in the characters. I felt that the ending was great,
but left me wanting to know what happened next! I can't wait to read the final
book in this fun and engaging trilogy.
So here is the great news about this book--it's free today
(Wednesday) and Thursday! Go check it
out by clicking on the following link! Be sure to get the first book, The
Banshee's Embrace, too!
Monday, February 4, 2013
Tired Of Printing Out That Manuscript???
I'm a writer. That means I write. But there are a lot of other things that go into writing a novel. Sure, there are the long hours of typing it all in, but there is up-front work that comes before the writing, and back-end stuff that follows the writing. I tend to do most of this on my MacBook Pro making changes as I go.
One of the things I've found the most difficult, however, for reasons I don't fully understand, is reading my own novel cover-to-cover without fiddling with it. There are plenty of reasons that this is important. For one thing, doing all that editing tends to take your mind off the flow. Instead of reading it as a reader would, your mind is stopping and starting all the time, switching gears between editor, typist, and reader. It isn't how readers are going to ingest your stuff, at least you hope it isn't, and unless you read cover-to-cover you're never going to know if your product is really ready.
It is also important to get your work in a format close to what it will be in the product stage. When consumers read a book they turn pages, the size of the page is different than a manuscript page, and they aren't scrolling. All these things subtly change the way a story enters your head. There is even the fact that reading on a computer is a "lean forward" activity and reading a book is a "lean back"activity. After a lifetime of leaning forward to study, and leaning back for leisure activities, our body position cues our mind up for either work or play. For enjoying a novel, you want to press PLAY.
And then there is printing the darn thing out. It is expensive and time consuming. I must have printed out my first novel twenty times. I had stacks and stacks of paper and empty toner cartridges all over the place. And carrying around a loose-leaf manuscript is anything but convenient. Plus, when you're done it all has to be thrown away. But writers like to know their work isn't going to fall into the wrong hands. Do I shred it? Burn it? Wallpaper my house with it? It's just an inconvenient mess that does nothing positive for the environment.
I decided to try something new with my current work in progress. The title of this novel is Viridis and I feel it is my best work yet. It is a classic boy meets girl story except this one happens in a dystopian universe that is unlike any you've ever read. It twists and turns all the way to the end. I'm in the end game now but hated to print it out because of the expense and the waste. Maybe it is because the story is set in an ultra-radical eco-Utopia?
Having become adept at building eBooks, I decided to turn it into a quick .mobi file and use my Kindle for the job. That way I get actual static pages that 'turn', I get to lean back, and I am unable to do any real editing so I can just read. The Kindle does allow me to highlight words and make simple notes, so I can flag typos and inconsistencies, but that's much different than more traditional editing - which is impossible in this format.
I am happy to report that it worked beautifully. Very, very pleased with the results. Not only was I able to enjoy the story a lot more (and was happy that I did) I caught and captured those typos without cutting down any more trees. If anyone is interested I would be happy to follow up in a later blog post with my recipe for creating a quick and dirty .mobi or .epub. It takes less time than printing it out, produces no waste, and is highly portable. You don't even need a pen. Plus, it is totally secure and if you own a reader, costs nothing. While generating publication quality ePubs takes a bit more time and training, if you can write a novel, you can definitely do this and you'll be glad you did.
John C. Brewer is the author of Multiplayer an MMOG YA SF novel, and The Silla Project, a North Korean nuclear romance. You can learn more about him and what he is doing at his website, JohnCBrewer.com
One of the things I've found the most difficult, however, for reasons I don't fully understand, is reading my own novel cover-to-cover without fiddling with it. There are plenty of reasons that this is important. For one thing, doing all that editing tends to take your mind off the flow. Instead of reading it as a reader would, your mind is stopping and starting all the time, switching gears between editor, typist, and reader. It isn't how readers are going to ingest your stuff, at least you hope it isn't, and unless you read cover-to-cover you're never going to know if your product is really ready.
It is also important to get your work in a format close to what it will be in the product stage. When consumers read a book they turn pages, the size of the page is different than a manuscript page, and they aren't scrolling. All these things subtly change the way a story enters your head. There is even the fact that reading on a computer is a "lean forward" activity and reading a book is a "lean back"activity. After a lifetime of leaning forward to study, and leaning back for leisure activities, our body position cues our mind up for either work or play. For enjoying a novel, you want to press PLAY.
And then there is printing the darn thing out. It is expensive and time consuming. I must have printed out my first novel twenty times. I had stacks and stacks of paper and empty toner cartridges all over the place. And carrying around a loose-leaf manuscript is anything but convenient. Plus, when you're done it all has to be thrown away. But writers like to know their work isn't going to fall into the wrong hands. Do I shred it? Burn it? Wallpaper my house with it? It's just an inconvenient mess that does nothing positive for the environment.
I decided to try something new with my current work in progress. The title of this novel is Viridis and I feel it is my best work yet. It is a classic boy meets girl story except this one happens in a dystopian universe that is unlike any you've ever read. It twists and turns all the way to the end. I'm in the end game now but hated to print it out because of the expense and the waste. Maybe it is because the story is set in an ultra-radical eco-Utopia?
Having become adept at building eBooks, I decided to turn it into a quick .mobi file and use my Kindle for the job. That way I get actual static pages that 'turn', I get to lean back, and I am unable to do any real editing so I can just read. The Kindle does allow me to highlight words and make simple notes, so I can flag typos and inconsistencies, but that's much different than more traditional editing - which is impossible in this format.
I am happy to report that it worked beautifully. Very, very pleased with the results. Not only was I able to enjoy the story a lot more (and was happy that I did) I caught and captured those typos without cutting down any more trees. If anyone is interested I would be happy to follow up in a later blog post with my recipe for creating a quick and dirty .mobi or .epub. It takes less time than printing it out, produces no waste, and is highly portable. You don't even need a pen. Plus, it is totally secure and if you own a reader, costs nothing. While generating publication quality ePubs takes a bit more time and training, if you can write a novel, you can definitely do this and you'll be glad you did.
Until next time,
John C. Brewer is the author of Multiplayer an MMOG YA SF novel, and The Silla Project, a North Korean nuclear romance. You can learn more about him and what he is doing at his website, JohnCBrewer.com
Friday, February 1, 2013
The Romance of All Things Writing
February is at last upon us. This is the month for romance and love--thank you very much Hallmark! Interestingly, I've recieved several requests from guest bloggers who all have romance books in varying subgenres being released this month or in early March. Since Valentine's Day is near, I've decided to feature several of these bloggers at All Things Writing on Wednesdays and Fridays.
Romance is one of the best selling genres. Let's face it. It's something that never goes out of style! But have you ever tried to write one? Ever tried to create a sex scene that doesn't sound cliched or over the top with heaving bosoms? Oh yes, there is a trick to writing romance as our upcoming bloggers will demonstrate.
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